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Question: 1 Poem, 1 Question!.!.!.What Do You Think!?
I have nothing more to say to you
all you suffered I helped you through
now you turn your back and flee
as if its okay to just forget me
I’m sick and tired of all your games
face it kid we're not the same
time has turned its back and ran
now its gone ain't comin back again
we lost so much that we once had
I’m not so sure I should be mad
but you make everything so hard
I try to tell you thats not smart
don’t make something out of nothing
don’t turn your back on me
don’t try to make me listen kid
I’m done I’m breaking free
I don’t know what you want from me
I’m tired of trying to succeed
you don’t trust me, I can see
you never really needed me
go ahead you broke my heart
and I don’t really care
I never should've trusted you
thought that you'd always be there
guess by now I’ve learned it well
you taught me what I know
a lesson learned the facts revealed
and now I turn to go
just before I leave you
theres one thing left unsaid
you knew I really liked you
yet you chose her instead
why!? I’ll always wonder
the question stands alone
you never knew the answer
it was always I don’t know
I’m sick of trusting people
who turn their back and flee
so now I’m picking up my life
its my turn now to leave!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awesome! 10/10! very cool!. I love how you did the ending!. You wernt gonna take any more from some one that was just using you! way to go(even if there is still heart ache)
Loved the poem=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Heartbreak, yada, yada, yada, why are poets always either depressed or on ecstacy!? Try using punctuation; there's some little keys on your keyboard, you know, ' : , !. ; They might improve it a bit, but there's nothing I can say for this depression thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is good!.long!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but good!. continue!.i like the way it seems like it is from the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow das deep makes me feel sad b-cuz i jus went thru somthin like dat!.!.!.!.but anybody dat dont like dat poem is obviously immature an doesnt understand a thang about life!!!! but u go girl keep writin dem poems cuz u good at it !!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is very good!. I love it =) I hope no one broke your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com