One single poem for a Saturday. How is it.?

Question: One single poem for a Saturday!. How is it!.!?

"steal the sun"

Feeling as if torn apart,
pleasure meets its match!.
Cries creep up my tightend throat,
I choke them back to hell!.

Relishing these moments,
the final seconds pass!.
Thunderstorms begin to form!.
to steal the sun away!.

This sweet passion that I need,
a tenderness I feel!.
Nails pounded in my flesh,
please, I need some more!.

With this darkest firmament,
she sees my fall, my grief!.
Waves wash clean the blood,
so nothing else remains!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Love, the climax, has now ended--hot and steamy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it brought to mind the innocence of love
and the need of passion and lust to over power beauty, for own selfish need!.

but then love conquered
that is what i felt when i read itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ok,,,so are you expressing that you are crying out for the lust desire and passion of a woman!.

i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ya did good, a bit better than average!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You're dark, but I like it!.
:]Www@QuestionHome@Com

okay i guess!?:/Www@QuestionHome@Com