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by Elaine P http://en!.wikipedia!.org/wiki/Rondelet We’ve had our fill, We are prepared to leave the Earth, We’ve had our fill Of war and hate; we shall not kill, We know than swords, pens have more worth, On Planet Mars we seek rebirth We’ve had our fill!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Looks good to me! You do love Mars, don't you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Yep - I would say 10/10!. I've only just discovered Rondelets - they seem to be neat little parcels to package one concept - and (unlike flippin' sestinas) they don't take all day! Are you sure war won't follow you to Mars!?Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a correct rondelet, and a correct message!. In this time, this place, let there be no war, only words, and the healing that comes from them!. Pen on, Elaine, I'll see you on our red planet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have done well Another style you have mastered You have done well Our Mother Earth's story you tell With our filth she has been plastered We've created a disaster You have done wellWww@QuestionHome@Com Sounds good, but not me on Mars, hope next landing is heaven sent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |