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Question: I need a title for this poem!. It's theme is created equal and is for a young writers contest!. Help!?!!?
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Your whole hypothesis is false!.

We are created equal, in the sight of God
That is the God of Jesus not that other God
The Muslim babe on higher plane than infidel is born
As is the Jew, because they,are, Gods own chosen ones
And heathy babes can hardly be
Compared with those still born
or those with Aids or missing Limbs
Newborn but forlorne!.

Equality a dangerous myth, of little truth composed!.
The youth, the babe, the elderly, all the same you suppose!?
Now I tell you verily Equality is naught!.
A chance remark from Jesus led us to this thought!.
As we all see our own friends as superior to all
Then at this massive hurdle your proposition falls!.!.

All men they are equal, in the sight of God!.
Inferior to Women, superior to Dog,
A biblical omission that Men and women be
in sight of god conjoin-ed, in equality!.
So search not for Title, this poem for to pen!.
But rip it up and then you can, start a bloody gen!.

(could not resist it Sorry only Joking)
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Equality is Hindu,
Christian,
Wicken,
and Hindu,
equality is me and you

you might want to change one of the Hindu

other than that why not just Equality i guessWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was okay, the rhythm seemed kind of off though!. Nice words, but the feelings didn't really get into it!. Your getting there though!. Good luck with your contest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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