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Question: The critics demanded clearer language from my next Trigee!. Do I have it!?
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I spun around !. !. !. !. !. !. the lamppost
crashing headlong !. !. was upside down
in the mirror !. !. !. !. !. !. !. this must mean
I was inverted !. !. !. !. !. !. the world was right

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Very nice & clear to me!. These look like fun!. I'll have to put this form on my to-do list!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The words and images are crystal clear!. Not only are they clear, but also delightful!. I love that the world is right!. I have a whimsical vision of you spinning around the lamppost!. It makes me smile!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see two, but not the third!. But, it's very well done for the most part!.

Yes, if that's not clear language, then I don't know what is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a good poem and seems to be an accurate description of your general condition!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Glad the world was finally right!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trigees are tricky!.
This one is witty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Clear enough for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I need clear, and this is clear to be sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You couldn't be much clearer then that!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Yes you do !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
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