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Kaleidoscope
our colors geometrically,
Kaleidoscope
rendering the crystalline slopes
tones and hues fantastically,
Orange green-blue elastically
Kaleidoscoped…
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Kaleidoscope our colors geometrically, Kaleidoscope rendering the crystalline slopes tones and hues fantastically, Orange green-blue elastically Kaleidoscoped… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very colorful!. Kaleidoscopes give me migraines!.!.!.I now leave for my Excedrin!.!.!.thanks TD!. =) just kidding!. The poem was wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com TD - what do you mean the rulebook said!? What rulebook!? All right, I'll let you have the 'd' 'cos you're the Boss!. I am waiting with baited breath (what a silly expression) for more gems like this!. (now back to my sestina)Www@QuestionHome@Com Kaleidoscope colors are always worth watching!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have been very mathematical lately!. Yes, it is very colorful math!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This was very colorful indeed!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Irrespective of the style and the rule-book, this is a very lyrical piece!. (Line 4 hurt my tongue!. )Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this!. It shapes up well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Darn it!. Now I've got a black ring around my eye!.!.!. Thanks a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com |