Friends and family---join together
bid farewell------------exposing hearts
exchange praise-----at the closing
of a journey------------shared a lifetime
joy and sorrows-------one departs
links unbroken---------carry onWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> #3 Is this a Tri-gee? Tell me please?Question: #3 Is this a Tri-gee!? Tell me please!? Friends and family---join together
bid farewell------------exposing hearts exchange praise-----at the closing of a journey------------shared a lifetime joy and sorrows-------one departs links unbroken---------carry onWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very nice, warm and caring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I would have to say that is definately a trigee, from the definitions I have gotten, and from my own standpoint it is quite a good trigee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'd prefer "a lifetime shared," but otherwise it's a wonderful Trigee with a loving message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is nice and touching!.!.!.family and friends are the most important in my life, even my virtual family of poetsWww@QuestionHome@Com Looks good to me!. Try "shared lifetimes" it seemed to flow better for me but again, just me!. lol Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Great! With a lovely message too!Www@QuestionHome@Com That's pretty cool! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com |