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Question: Is my poem Who is out there entertaining!?
In the woods I hear beeping
I feel behind me people creeping
Are these people I am feeling!?
Are they real or am I dreaming!?

So I turned round and start staring
But all I see is moonlight glaring
Then my body slowly quivers
Breaking out in all out shivers

So do I run or stand my ground
Or wait and see what comes around
My heat pumps greatly from inside
I get feeling I can't hide

These strange sounds that I am hearing
Closely by and near a clearing
I hear a howl and then a pause
Just like somehow it had a cause

So I give out an evil blast
For ten seconds, it did last
It was like a curling yell
Who's ever out there go to hell

Well I can't believe what I am seeing
A young couple surely fleeing
They are scared more, more then me
They left their clothes there on a treeWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very visual poem with an amusing ending!. You have real talent for imagery and meter!. I would like to see more of your work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one! I can just picture the young couple taken by surprise and running for shelter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's Great!

Alot better than most poems people ask what other people think of on Yahoo answers because your not trying too hard to be clever!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it~especially for HalloweenWww@QuestionHome@Com

its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com