Do you like my poem? Don't Fence Us In?

Question: Do you like my poem!? Don't Fence Us In!?

We've been around, we touched the ground
The sky is not too tall

Like soaring birds, or unspoken words
The mystery's one for all

I see you here, but are you there
The mind is free to fly

As Hendrix said, while in his head
Excuse me while I kiss the sky

Morrison knew, as he broke on through
The walls must tumble down

Though stormy seas, may bend our knees
We stand upon solid ground

The framework here, has been quite clear
A moral to mores in pen

Let the sound of freedom, ring loud and clear
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow, that's really good!. I like the internal rhyme in every other line!.!.!.nice touch!! I also like how you included that Hendrix line!. Very nice poem, gets the message across loud and clear!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful poem
It talks about freedom
because with a title
don't fence us in!.
It may be about the soaring birds
and there is the you were there, but I was here
Then the seas which came to a person's knees!.
It has things of nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh yeah, I like it!. I'm very encouraged today, I have found, like this, some good, light, clean, rhyming poetry!. It is keen, and thoughtful!. Good rhyme and rhythm!. I love the last line, don't change it!. It doesn't have to rhyme!. The last line is very strong, a good statement!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is fnfdhwdpqwuedhqwuhd10827rt8240r@#R@R$@r` amazing!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really good!. I like how you tied in musicians to the theme!. Try to make the last one flow better!. Make more syllables in it!. Like "Please don't fence us in"Www@QuestionHome@Com

awesome, I really like this, I love the references to the singers and the theme of the poem!. excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well done!.!.!.!.
Keep writing, you have the gift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

dangg!.
yeah that is pretty dang good!.
I really like it:)
its peaceful!.
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your good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hell yeah, that was awesome!. Great work and amazing talent!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

good poem!.!.!.but the last line doesn't really flow with the restWww@QuestionHome@Com

yeah it's pretty good !!!

if you wrote it your self !.!.!.!.!.!.

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