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Question: This one is too wide and too wild!. What is your opinion!?
“With a blast from !. !. !. !. !. !.“The Trojans, breakers of horses
thy nostrils the waters !. !. !. !. when they were fighting at Ilion
were gathered together !. !. !. !. to be widowed of such a man
the floods stood upright, as a heap"!. !.could beat off the day!?"
from Exodus !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. from HomerWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Only one kudo* from me, and that is for this truly valiant effort!.
But it does not make too much sense when read straight across!. The effort itself, however, was inspired!.

*The Board of Directors of the Poetry Section, Department of Absurd Trivialities and Trivial Absurdities, has instructed me to inform the General Public that the Greek word "kudos" is indeed a singular noun, but it has granted me permission to abuse it for the sake of The Lame Joke!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a bit of a flood light of a poem, but I think it is extremely well done!. Congratulations!.

96 out of 100!. If you don't agree, thats fine!. But, what good is literature without opinion!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I find it a bit confusing!. I read it aloud three times and still kept getting stuck in L3 of both stanzas!. You're right that it is wild; the stanzas don't seem to segue into each other!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok !.!.!.!.I like this one !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Even though I'm a little confused
The more I read it the better I !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.get it!?!? !.!.!.understand it !?!?

Well it's been a long Day / Week !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.And your right !.!.!.!.!.!.!.it is wild !.!.A lot of thinking / thought goes with this oneWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is an encyclopedia of world knowledge in just five lines!. Can you also do the whole works of Shakespeare (yes, a challenge!!!)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I get it!. I see all three poems!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i am really confused!Www@QuestionHome@Com