Do you like my June 6th poem?

Question: Do you like my June 6th poem!?

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War Faces
by TD Euwaite

Faces do not fight the war
of arms and legs and bases!.

Faces beg to eager youth
backgrounded by strange places!.

Faces are remembered well
as cowards are disgraces!.

Faces have been torn away
and framed in sacred places!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Oh yes, of course -- your talent flows from your fingertips like skiing down a slope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have once again presented a surprisingly difficult form and made it seem effortless and simple!. The content is also simple - simple to understand, but difficult to deal with!. There is no one whose desire for peace is stronger than that of a veteran!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Again, very graphic!. Every creature on Earth, including plants, is wired to kill for survival!. Survival takes many forms, from needing sunlight to needing to die a winner with the most toys!. I think it will be this way until the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A face amid the crowd, of much too many,
and some surely wear masks!.

Faces have been torn away, graphic line of sad truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the interesting couplet rhymes!. I like the message too!. Sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very moving and powerful, well done TD, it made me remember my friend Adrian who was lost in the Falklands warWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is!.!.!.WOW! This is deep, this is!.!.!.!.really, really great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well said!. Last stanza extremely poignant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's very strong & graphic !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A much fitting poem on this day of RememberanceWww@QuestionHome@Com

A different rhyme but I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ya i like it too!.
pretty heavy ending!.

and some frames i have around
sure makes my face
hear a remembering heart pound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

koolWww@QuestionHome@Com

love it! very strongWww@QuestionHome@Com

i give that an 8!.5 that was really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com