First poem i write. . . What u think?

Question: First poem i write!. !. !. What u think!?

I know now in my heart you never loved me,
still writing these words hurt me!.

You were there for me and
i thought you cared!.

You asked me to be your girlfriend
and i said yes, not knowing it was all a game!.

You cheated, You lied, You hurt me!.

All i ask is why!?

I'm not much of a poet i just wrote this because of my ex boyfriend =(Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The poem is very well
for a first one!.
I can see you could write poetry
from your poem
you went through deceit
along with pain and heartache!.
Your ex boyfriend should be ashamed
of himself!.
Lying, cheating, hurting abuse is not the way
for a relationship!.
My dear you can ask why
all you want
and I don't think you will get an answer
To me I sense cruelty

When you are ready for another relationship
start off slow, get to know each otherWww@QuestionHome@Com

you did a very good job, especially for your first time!. Sometimes i think you don't have to be an expert to write a good poem!. You just have to write from the heart!. And that's exactly what you did! 2 thumbs up Hun!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry, but its very boring and unoriginal, and sounds so generic and bland, and is completely absent of any poetic devices at allWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's not a poem, it's a lazy rant that every middle schooler writes at some point in their dating fail!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its really sweet and good!. i think its perfect but in your next poem i recommend you try some similiesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very short!. But its really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ehWww@QuestionHome@Com

A little to average, no offenceWww@QuestionHome@Com