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Question: This is a five minuter!.!.!.!.what do you think!?
you and I are here today
we should get things straight
there is no time like the present
and tomorrow might be too late
I want you to know I love you
always have and always will
I just had to let you know
all the things that I feel
I know you have another
and I see he treats you wrong
you deserve so much better
you deserve a love that's strong
you are a wonderful person
inside and out
you are a genuine article
that I don't want to live without
I know it's kind of sudden
but I couldn't let this go
I had to tell you how I feel
just so you would knowWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm with Audball on this one!.!.!.it's amazing that you could write such an amazing, thought-provoking poem in five minutes!. I've been into writing like that for a while, but something like that would usually take me upwards of 10 minutes!.
It really shows how emotionally connected you are to the poem!. Very powerful, I love it! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
great
u show lots of potential
ur like shakespeare
love it
it paints a picture of how im feeling right now about a guy that i love
he deserves so much better the gf he has
u would win a poetry compotition
i LOVE it
keep writing
10 outta 10
5 outta of 5 stars
probably my fav 1
plz put more on
ur a gr8 poet,very poetic
much better than i can write
-peace out :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
this poem should be called "A Confession of Love!." I love it!. It shows what happens when someone loves someone, and has the courage to say it to that person!. I enjoyed it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You wrote that in five minutes!!?!!?!!?!!? Holy crap, that's amazing!!
You're really good!. It's very powerful!. I <3 it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is so nice that your words flow,
and you know what I mean when I say,
you go girl go!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com