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i asked like two other questions and someone had really helped me and it really helped here is the poem!. tell me what you think!. i need some criticism!. and tell me where i can fix things at!.

love is the way i felt when we first met,
the way i got butterflies in my stomach

love is the way i felt when you walked towards me,
the way my heart pounded so fast

love is the way i just walked up to you and spoke,
the way i felt so nervous

love is the way i wished you had your arm around me,
the way you had your arm around her

love is the way you told me you liked me,
the way i liked you

love is the way i felt when i looked into your eyes,
the way it sent a tingling sensation down my spine

love is the way i felt when you tickled me,
the way you wouldn't let me frown

love is the way i felt when you called me babe,
the way i had known i was your one and only

love is the way i felt when you told me you loved me,
the way i feel for you

love is the way you understand me,
the way i understand you

love is the way you put your arms around me,
the way i feel so secure

love is the way you did all this,
the way i knew i loved you tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

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