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Trigee #4
Peace paid for by !. !. !. !. !. Blood in waves
A strange currency !. !. !. !. From gashed heads
Printed red and white !. !. !. Flows like a tide
Born of hate rushed !. !. !. !. Through my dream
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Trigee #4 Peace paid for by !. !. !. !. !. Blood in waves A strange currency !. !. !. !. From gashed heads Printed red and white !. !. !. Flows like a tide Born of hate rushed !. !. !. !. Through my dream *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is exquisitely terrifying!. The truth here is also a nightmare, one that haunts me frequently!. I have never seen this form before and it is very intriguing!. You have conquered it masterfully!. Remarkable!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Especially graphic, frightening, nightmarish!. The Trigee is a very versatile form; no room in this form for EWD!. The images come through clearly without the encumbrance of excessive words!. This is swiftly becoming one of my favorite forms!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Power and greed spread fear!. Kill spirit, dreams, hope!. I like this Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com This one could be made into a horror flick!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This to me is your best you posted this morn!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I sometimes have dreams like this one!. Hate is scary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Ouch! nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com whoa!! i wish i could give you 10 points, wonderful!!Www@QuestionHome@Com |