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Question: Can a Trigee also be dark and foreboding!?
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Trigee #4

Peace paid for by !. !. !. !. !. Blood in waves
A strange currency !. !. !. !. From gashed heads
Printed red and white !. !. !. Flows like a tide
Born of hate rushed !. !. !. !. Through my dream

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This is exquisitely terrifying!. The truth here is also a nightmare, one that haunts me frequently!. I have never seen this form before and it is very intriguing!. You have conquered it masterfully!. Remarkable!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Especially graphic, frightening, nightmarish!. The Trigee is a very versatile form; no room in this form for EWD!. The images come through clearly without the encumbrance of excessive words!. This is swiftly becoming one of my favorite forms!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Power and greed spread fear!. Kill spirit, dreams, hope!.

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This one could be made into a horror flick!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This to me is your best you posted this morn!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I sometimes have dreams like this one!. Hate is scary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ouch!



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