Do you like my new regular poem?

Question: Do you like my new regular poem!?

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Vinaigrette
by TD Euwaite

They cannot say we mix well,
you are heavy and I float, suspended over you!.
A stalk dipped down through us
is flavored by both you and I
yet the tongue knows one taste,
a bittersweet tang…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

My first thought was a root-beer float, but I read it backwards!.!.!.
(Then I read the title!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oil and vinegar mix long enough to make a tang on the tongue!. (Check out first person subject v object pronoun)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A tang!.!.!. bitterly sweet
is still a tangy tang!.

Is an example of where two opposites work!. Trigee inspired!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kinda weird, you on something man!.
Guess its mildly pornographic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just got up and you start talking about food!. Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've made me want a stalk of celery !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com