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Position:Home>Poetry> Redo of Trigee #3. I have a tiny monitor (temporary). I can't see a thing (aQuestion: Redo of Trigee #3!. I have a tiny monitor (temporary)!. I can't see a thing (as usual)!. Do you like this form!? *****
Trigee #3 no soldier wants !. !. !. !. !. !. war with men who dream to be immortal !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. senselessly peaceful with the living ghosts !. !. !. !. among brothers and sons of the ancients !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. with no blood to shed *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yes, I like this form very much!. I shall attempt a go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think this is beautiful, haunting!. This one is especially clever and intense!. I have fallen in love with this form!. Your poems are wonderfully educational !. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Unusual, I see things in it but I understand the form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com the form is kinda weird, but then again I'm not use to it so whatever to me!!. I do like your poem though;)Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it now that I can understand it!. Seven more to go!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |