On the Water: A Euwaitian Trigee
by Elaine P
On the ocean!.!.!.!.!.With my love
Swiftly sailing!.!.!.!.!.O'er the waves
Dolphins follow!.!.!.Lightly leaping
Singing songs!.!.!.!.Hearts ablaze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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by Elaine P On the ocean!.!.!.!.!.With my love Swiftly sailing!.!.!.!.!.O'er the waves Dolphins follow!.!.!.Lightly leaping Singing songs!.!.!.!.Hearts ablaze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I believe it is! Good job!.!.!.beautiful image!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That's the spirit!. The two pieces can be complimentary or contradictory!. I learned this by accident!. I was reading Valkyrie lyrics with a big split in the middle of each line!. The sections almost made little poems themselves!. I don't know if this has been done before!. I have about 10 of them, so far!. I have much catching up to do, including sending merchandise to people who have been waiting for a month!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes I believe it is---here is my first attempt!.Let me know if I got it,I've never tried this before,bear with me!. Campfire Nights Bonfire warm upon my hands----marshmallows turning golden Light from the fire in his eyes----turning oh so hot Is the bonfire too hot------Will something get burned Have to turn down the heat----Before I get a chance to savourWww@QuestionHome@Com My head hurts! my head hurts!.!.!.!.!.I try this style while doing this!.!.!.!.!.I just might die do i praise!.!.!.!.!.It is so good do I dis!.!.!.!.!.should I just try Do you have any idea how hard it is to get any semblance of logic out of this while trying to rhyme!? I like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Super Elaine! You've mastered TD's new Trigee!. It is a beautiful poem!. I like the dolphins following, singing songs!. And your heart swelling with love!. Well done!. This is a keeper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Trigee morning I see!. Watch the waves as you seem to have a trough between your crests, trigee induced of course! Nice one, as usual!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I do believe you've got it! And done it very good too! Good morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com What ever it's birth, It is lovely! on either side!. Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com |