A small poem "The Moon"?

Question: A small poem "The Moon"!?

Its a few weeks old but do you like!?

Luminous moon
Enlighten the night
Twinkling stars
Glowing with light
Behind is the sun
Keeping it bright
Shining in darkness
It blazes alight!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like the intermittent rhyming scheme!. I like the words used!.
For me, it has this childishly cute feel to it!. It's like one of those catchy rhymes that parents would tell their kids at a campfire and would get passed on!. It's simplistic but that only helps its image and might have even been deliberate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT!!!! It's so cute! especially since it's short nd you didn't try to force extra in!. I Love it! great job and props to you :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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