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Question: Do any of you get what the story is about!? What does it mean to you!?
Tearing of a Knights Heart
She stood inside her walled up house
A castle of her Mind Numb making
Looking out at two lone figures
The cold of wind her form was shaking
I looked up and wished to enter
The one who stood behind me
Ever in a solace trance
The walled up Girl was torn between
The other wore a gown and coat
She held the key to every door
But would never know quite how to turn them
My lack of will made my heart sore
When the girl, atop her tower
Heeded to my shallow cry
She never let me close enough
To give her wings and touch the sky
When my will was wore from trying
Finally she dropped a line
Part way up I looked to see her
But she had left the wall behind
And out of forest came a teared cry
And no one heard her plea for help
Another with no one to save her
In my mind a care I felt
I stepped down and searched to find
The reason for this strangers pain
Knowing deep within my soul
The braided cord would end in vainWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Along with Amy, I hope you have found your catharsis!. Is this why you have told me what you told me!? Is this why!? Do you think I would love you less for you giving love to another!. I cannot hold against you my own myriad crimes!. I cannot hold your heart prisoner while mine flies free!. DO NOT feel guilty for this, faded knight, your sword still shines bright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This pain is only temporary!.!.!. it will pass!. But do not think that the passing of pain will be, for lack of a better word, painless!. I can see what you are going through is both amazing on one hand and torturous on the other!.!.!. you are being torn in-between those who you wish to care for and love but you have to ask yourself the question, where are you most needed and most happy!.!.!. it is okay, sometimes, to be a little selfish!.!.!. never lose that caring heart but don't care so hard that you end up resenting all you ever cared about! I hope you get through this Rouxe, you are too beautiful to be hurt for too long!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"She never let me close enough!.!.!.To give her wings and touch the sky" is an infinitely beautiful line that seems to define part of the sorrow here!. The story seems very personal and real, and the emotions written into the images are powerful!. The feeling of being torn is clearly present, along with doubt and fear!. I hope the writing of this amazing poem was a catharsis for you!. For your very personal sharing, I do thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com