Love Poem. Worst ever? comments please.?

Question: Love Poem!. Worst ever!? comments please!.!?

My love is not like a red rose!.
Cause Roses need manure
And you are sweet and beautiful
and bright serene and pure!.
or at least perhaps you were
when our first **** you did endure
your beauteous brow all creased in pain!.
I'll never let you do that again
You cried as in your rear I slipped
The intended target narrowly missed
used not the hole whereby you pissed
as my frustration I released
Our relationship now abruptly ceased!.
I think that I'll turn Gay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I think it sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I blame the Planning dept!. Who else would stick the Sewage Plant next to a Leisure centre!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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