Tell me what you think of my poem please?

Question: Tell me what you think of my poem please!?

well im 16 i wrote this a year ago and im not putting the whole thing up because its not copyrighted yet!.please give me honest opinions !.Its called Stumble to my senses

The brush of your lips against my cheek makes me shiver thinking soon ends will meet!.

The intoxicating smell of your cologne lingers in my memory!.

That sweet melodic voice of yours soothes my soul and opens my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I know you are afraid that your work will be stolen, but you should post the whole thing on here!. I would be able to get a better gist of the poem if it was completely posted!. Anyway, if someone tried to steal it, you would have proof you wrote it in the form of this question!.

Back on subject!. I really like the descriptions!. It makes me feel like I'm in love with him too!. You used great visionary/sensory words such as intoxicating, melodic, etc!. I think you should keep working on this poem!. Maybe try to balance the lines out!. All in all, good poem! I rate it a 8!.5, but I'm a sucker for love poetry!.

Hope I helped!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a little short, but like you said you didn't put it all up there!.
But from what you have, it's really good so far!.
Keep up the good work!

God bless you!Www@QuestionHome@Com