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Question: Can u help me finish this!?!?!?!? please!?
i am the sun that lights the room
i am the one that puts a smile on everyone's face!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.what should i write now!?!?!?!?

i am not really good at writing poems sooo please help meWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i am the sun that lights the room
i am the one that puts a smile on everyone's face
i am the one you've always wanted
i am the wind that brushes past you
i am the one you fail to notice
i am the strength in everyones eyes
i am the one you left behind
i am the one who'll never turn around!.

don't really know what direction you want to go with this!.!. keep doing "i am" or what!.!. or bring in something else but theres something i guess!? hope that helps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am the one that you shouldn't be asking,!.!.!. cause i write; just not for other people!!.!.!. But you should keep it up though, cause thats sounds pretty good so far for someone that isn't very good at it, it shows you have talent for it!. Don't ask other people for lines, just don't think that hard for it, cause it should just flow!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i am the sun that lights the room
i am the one that puts a smile on everyone's face
i am the one you've always wanted
i am the one you fail to notice
i am the one you left behind
i am not the one who!.!.!.!.!.!?
going off the 1st person's ideas!.!.!.!.dont give me credit lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

iam the one that you want,
iam the one that will never break!.
My spirit isnt for sale!.
You can try, but im not the one that will ever give in!.

idk!.!.!.!. i just wrote that right now!.!.!.!. sometimes i even surprise myself! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com