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Deep Winters Night

Black as night, yet clear as day
That is how these eyes recall this play

On a mountain top stands Edan
A knight broken with pain
Along side her, brother Harken
A fellow knight, who beholds her strain

The night sky bespeckeled by stars, and intoxicated with moon
The Knights engage in a moment that will end to soon

Edan's soul overflows, over walls she can no longer hold
Harken takes heed, he knows the words to which is being told

Anger, suffering, and lost hope
Heavy baggage which Edan can bare no more
Her tattered soul desperately clutches deaths door

Comfort, hope, and love Harken knows she needs
For this is what his soul bleeds

Strong, noble, and bold
This Knight Harken is called
For Edan this night he will uphold

In his arms she falls, weathered and worn
It is on the mountain top that they'll ride the storm

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I'd personally make these into a book!. You have characters, you have lots of detail, this could be a really awesome book!. I like the poem though, noticed that almost all the words end with the same letters, nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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