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Question: "Watcha going to do!?" Do you like my Poem!?
Whatca going to do!?
Whatca going to say!?
Where will you hide!?
When the master calls you

What will you provide!?
Where will you go!?
How will you answer!?
When he calls out your name

Mountains can’t hide
Clouds can’t cover
So what will you do,
When Jesus calls you!?

When He calls you by name
You know there is no other
How will you stand
When next to your brother!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow!.!.very poignant!.!.i love it and im not even a christianWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm going to say,"How ya doin, kiddo!? Got a light and a beer!?"
God has a sense of humor!.!.!.always has, always will!. If you think He will be offended by what I just wrote, that I would say to Him!.!.!.!.wrong, wrong, wrong!.
He has much more important things to be offended by!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hallelujah! I will kneel
With my eyes upon the clouds!.
I will say, Thank You Lord God Almighty!
In a voice so strong and loud!.

I will praise Him true enough
For the life and soul He made!.
So when He shows up at my door
I'll offer Him some lemonade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good expressive, truthful words, but kind of childish writing!. Maybe you could work on it and improve on the rhythm, and rhyme!. Then you would come up with a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's right the second time Christ comes back, he comes back as judge!. And there are some bad folks that won't be able to stand!. They will want the mountains to fall on them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the question end up overwhelming the rreader and sound somewhat accusatoryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting quiz!. I hope most people pass it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it 4 stars!Www@QuestionHome@Com