I wrote this pretty quickly yesterday!. I'd like some feedback on the direction it's heading!. also, please check out my other (Which I think is better, and finished): http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.
Wake up!.!.
This is too much!.!.
My life continues, but!.!.
It's just never enough!.!.
Stranger, to myself now
My reflection, not what it used to be
I don't even know how
Looking at myself, what can't I see!?
Everything falls out of place
As I feel the ground shake
Do you believe this is real or fake!?
Standing still, I feel the wake!.!.
Do you hear the grinding!?
I'm falling down, down, up
My thoughts are unwinding
Life going backwards, it's toughWww@QuestionHome@Com