I call it a Haiku-ballad what do you think?

Question: I call it a Haiku-ballad what do you think!?

just some brain droppings, nothing real life!.

In honor of you

In honor of you
I walk the streets with a fear
for what lies ahead

you made it so clear,
the day that you said goodbye
was clouded with dread

when you left that day
how could I ever have known
you wanted me dead

I survived your wrath
now not afraid anymore,
I've come for your head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think artists should own up, accept the fact that their "brain droppings" are as part of them as their children, as much real life as can be!.
This dropping makes one wish they can drop powerful lines as these!.
You make the day less drab!. Write more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thanks for that!. it was nice!. I shall also continuously use the phrase "brain droppings" in conversation until my friends all want me dead!. It's my new favorite word!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

with a few improvs and some good instrumentals!.!.!.it would be a good song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Looks good to me for a quick write!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's in between ok and good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good job! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

honestly!? !.!.!.!.!.!.!.mehWww@QuestionHome@Com