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Question: What should I add on to this poem!?
she is beautiful like a sunset
she is as pretty as a rose


Too give some ideas her name is Rachel, she plays the clarinet, sassy and sweet, confident and fierce

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She is beautiful like a sunset
She is pretty as a rose!.
She is absolute perfection
From her head down to her toes!.
Oh Rachel darling Rachel
Can I ever win your love!.
Your succulent Vagina
It fits me like a glove!.
Sweet music from your clarinet
Sassy, confident and yet!.
somehow vulnerable it seems
from you the lady of my dreams
I adore your sweet nature for sure
each kiss makes want you more
Oh Rachel, Rachel, Rachel, please
from my cares oh please release!.
me If my true love you will not be!.
I'll try and pull Anne or Beyonce

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Talk about her personality and why she means so much to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Depends on what it's for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Her soft voice lingers in my ears
This wasn't chance it was fateWww@QuestionHome@Com