BE HONEST:
i spend so much of the clock's ticks thinking of you
imagining your face and mine put together
our fingers interwined as we walk through the dark trees
theres no worry in me, you're here with protection
my laughter has never been so loud and real
you're smile gets me everytime
i shut my eyes as i fall onto the floor with you,
unwillingly they open and view the white ceiling of my prison,
for without you that is all it is,
i wish you could see the dreams i dream, and maybe you
would see, maybe you would, although
its highly unlikely, you've never really seen me
for now i will contine to dream, and deal with the pleasure
myself, and the pain which pursues!.
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my friend wanted me to get second opinions for her, she doesnt have a yahoo account herself!. she wants you to be, quote "100% TOTALLY UTTERLY HONEST" and she, quote, "SUCKS A$$ AT POEMS"!. this is for her project at school!. i think the poem is good, but she doesnt want just my opinion, wut do u think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com