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Motel rooms tell tall tales
Of smells of cheap Lust
Colliding into sounds of
Self-expression hesitation
For fluorescent lights
Shine on adolescent nights
Nervous glances to the alarm clock
Flashes about 12 o'clock
It's midnight's late reminder of
Teenage love
For fluorescent lights
Shine on adolescent nights
For a pessimist, she pretty optimistic
One might say simplistic
As he feels the need to let her go
Teenage angst
On the cold tile floor he cuts deep
Steeper steeper steep
For fluorescent lights
Shine on adolescent nights
Alone he tries to survive
Dragging her between his thighs
To release his pain
On rundown beds- stained
Do not disturb says a sign
Although she feels the need to
Succumbing to his desires
Of barbered wired thoughts, liar
For fluorescent lights
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