First poem for a Tuesday. Do you like it.?

Question: First poem for a Tuesday!. Do you like it!.!?

"thirteen"

Reflections lie,
the mirror knows!.
Yesterdays past,
tomorrows gone!.

Thirteen long years,
promises died!.
You'll see my rage,
she'll see me cry!.

Straight of of hell,
not only bats!.
Scripts have been written,
now take your fall!.

No more discussion,
words I desire!.
For the chosen few,
I don't know why!.

Know what I see,
the voice and the veil!.
Know where I stand,
I'll not tell you why!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

3rd Verse: "straight of of hell" should probably be "straight out of hell" or something similar, right!? LOL, a typo!.!.!.

4th Verse: Don't ask me why, I don't know!.!.!.but "I'll not tell you why" seems unfitting for a last sentence!. I can't put my finger on it, but it doesn't seem to flow as well as the rest!.

That is just me being picky!. :) It's another great poem, good job!. <3

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Hey Dark Prince of words, as this morning broke dawn turned on my pc as soon as I woke!
Glad to let you know, you were the first written words,my eyes did see,
and it did please me yes in deedy>LOL Loved it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like it! Light, deep, and airy!. Good flow!. Like the reflections, mirror, and tomorrow past!. 3rd V!. reminds me of critiquing until we only have an empty, black coffin!. Like 4th!. written words for the chosen few!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!!this poem is magnificent!.!.!.your apostrophic pattern is great and i wish i'm would be as good as you in writting poems and these kinds of poems are uniqueWww@QuestionHome@Com

hi happy happy prince !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.me got a big fat lip!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and its raining outside !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but im still in a good moodWww@QuestionHome@Com

It was great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh how i've missed your poems so my dear brother!.!.!.well!.!.!.
i have something to say!.!.!.
I"M BAAAAAAAACK!!!!!
anywho!.!.!.wonderful! just as you always are!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com