A kind of dark and emo poem, what do you think?

Question: A kind of dark and emo poem, what do you think!?

Bleed out your Pain

Bang your head on the wall,
crush your skull,
let your brain run out,
forget the bad memories,
keep the good ones,
leave the pain behind,
finally be free,
free of the hell that is life,
free of the yelling and hitting,
the people who don't care,
the people who don't understand,
just be by yourself,
thinking of the past,
and how it will end,
forever!.!.!.at last!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I want to know why you are so sad and bitter!.!.!. I know how it is to be in the place that this poem suggests you may be in and how no matter how hard you try you can't make yourself feel better!.!.!. the best remedy for that is good friends!. Once you find them then you have found your gold!

You probably want to hear something about your poem instead of my feeble attempts at psychology (therapist and psychologist never did much good)!.!.!.

You have emotion (thus the term "emo") But this could be so much more if you let them into your thoughts but explaining in a much more descriptive way!.!.!. don't be afraid to be real! Judging from this you are not afraid to be hardcore!.!.!.

Blessed Be, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good! Except it makes me feel kinda sad!.!.!.Besides that though, it's really deep and moving! Keep up the good work, and write more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's deep and very emotional I don't know y u wrote it but I had a situation where I felt exactly the same as u !.!.!.if u r writing this with really feelings!.!.!.!.I like it it helps get out my hurt!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com