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Question: Is this really a poem, or is it prose!?
With holiday read in hand I lie
in a neglected sun-baked garden,
dotted with drooping daises
and dandelion clocks!.

As a constant reminder that this is Greece
nearby stand gnarled silver-green olive trees
the epitome of history and peace!.

Behind me is a crumbling white-washed wall!.
Cascades of white roses tumble like
a waterfall down its face filling the air
with a rare and delicate perfume!.

In the distance comes an insistent
coo of a dove
from the fir-clad hills above!.
Its call creating a soothing counter-melody
to the noisy sparrows,
gossiping and fighting in the fruit-free trees!.

So clear in the sky, as if just created,
I see Mount Olympus, home of the gods
in the majestic white clustering clouds,
painted on a canvas of an unreal blue!.
Its hue reflecting the turquoise serenity
of the timeless Aegean Sea!.

Across my vision swifts persistently swoop,
their flight an erratic dart and dive,
like paper aeroplanes tossed by a carefree child!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Anything can be a poem, even straight out poetry!. It's up to the poet to decide if it's a poem!. But, if you call something a poem and it's not a very good poem, then you will be lambasted by the poetry community!. This is the same thing with prose, though!. A very good poem can be bashed because you called it prose!. This, however, is clearly a poem as it has no narrative structure!. But a narrative poem can be called "prose" just as easily as prose poetry can be called a "poem"!. Naomi Shihab Nye is a very good prose poet, if you're interested in finding out more about that!. And narrative poetry is, well, all over the place, from Beowulf to The Odyssey to Shakespeare and, in modern day, Yehuda Amichai and Seamus Heaney are great narrative poets!.
Long story short, you've got a very nice little poem there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very descriptive!. It's obvious from the poem that you are in unfamiliar territory!. Even the meter is different from your usual poetry, as if you were not really sure how to describe all these unfamiliar sights (and sites)!. In the end, the tension seems to get to you and you finally surrender to Morpheus!. Interesting, how the mind works!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Welcome back from holiday!. At least you brought this nice gem to share!. From dandelion clocks to the swifts you have painted the scenery well!. A puzzling question remains though: was it a book of poetry in your lap or some latest gothic romance!? lol Compliments to you on this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Last year I went to Greece for my holiday, and I fell in love!. Thanks for reminding me about what a magical place it is with this--and here is the answer to your question--fine POEM!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Colors of Greece, once seen never forgotten, your memory
and description lovely, as was the all of your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Greece sounds beautiful, one of the places on my travel wish list! The poem has great imagery, I enjoyed reading it and being there for a little while through your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Imagination is a door!. This is poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a lovely poem!. I am so glad to see you back!. It seems like you were gone a long time!. I hope your travels inspired you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To me, it is a poem!. It reads like a poem!. It has wonderful imagery and flows effortlessly!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a poem, and a very good one!. As I have come to expect from you, a job well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's beautiful! I love it, great imagery!
I would say a poem, it's hard to tell sometimes! I write poems that are very long, they could be short stories!
(Here is one of my shorter ones!!.!.!.http://www!.poemhunter!.com/poem/for-i-am-!.!.!.
But yeah, i think it's too image-filled to be prose!.
Great work though, i can just imagine it!
XD!

Anyway anything can be poetry; from one liners and haiku, to 3 pages! Poetry can really be anything, some things are expected, but really you can write a story and call it a poem!
Yours is definately a poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com