Does this poem sound deep to you, and how does it make you feel?

Question: Does this poem sound deep to you, and how does it make you feel!?

This is a completely original poem!.

Cutts

They cut themselves,
To relieve the pain!.

To take away,
The daily strain!.

But all the scars,
are formed in vain!.

Because the hurt,
Returns again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

But for these souls
Salvation lies
At the store
At discount price
In size three eight
And Fourty Four
the pain to cure
for ever more!.
The trigger gently
to caress
And so commeth
instant death!.

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I think it would resonate well with the experience of a self cutter!.

It's a good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good beginning but end needs more work, good luck :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

great starting point!.!.!. u need to add more deepness!. n maybe exprees pain on a different level!.!. great job thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds deep to me!.!.!.This poem is making my wrists hurt b/c I hate cuts of all sorts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com