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"I feel the same every day
I wish I didn't live this way
I think everything is turning gray
It all stays the same, no matter what I say
I think I'm reaching the end
I've never really followed the trend
So is there anything left to defend!?
When that's not here, I feel my head bend
Do you ever ask yourself why!?
Have you really ever even tried!?
Have you even had to say goodbye!?
Have you ever wondered what it's like to die!?
But!.!.
Where's the good side!?
All I need is you
If I want to stay alive
And everything I say is true
I just hope you can believe
That I'll always be here to stay
I know exactly what we both need
Watching you from far, fading away
Fading away
You have to stay
You can't go away
No, not this day
Counting down
Thinking of my love for you
Look what I've found
A few words that will keep you around"Www@QuestionHome@Com