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Question: Do you like my poem thanks!?
A gentle breeze
on golden face,
eyes dark like ace of spades!.
Your footprints in sand
I touch,
A wanting more potent
than lust!.
Your hair that dances
in time,
to ebbs and flows of tide!.
A smile I long to kiss
and taste,
to have one chance,
I'd fall from grace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
nice, I'd grade it an A+!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is beautiul :]
it made me smile and feel warm inside reading it
is it about your partner your someone you have your eye on!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very romantic and tastefulWww@QuestionHome@Com
WOW! that's soooo romantic!. You are very talented!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes I like it!
Your imagery is very clear and romantic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
love it =]
especially the last verse/stanzaWww@QuestionHome@Com
awwww!.
it's cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it
did u write it!?
good job if u wrote it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its ok!.!.!. dont really have that much romance in my soul though so probably not the best person to ask lol!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, is the simple answer! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
sucks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
I really liked it ,it was pretty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
not bad at all!.!.!.good on you!.!.thanks for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com
wow! that's gr8!
i'm rubbish at rhyming words and doing poems lolWww@QuestionHome@Com