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Question: Does Anyone Like my poem(s)!?
This called Love the World
Love the World so good and pure,
Gives us Everything We need for sure,
The world loves us all the way to its core,
Why dont we love it!?
We pollute the land and fill it up,
Soda cans and Plastic bags,
Love the World
Dont hate it!.
Stop Pollution

My other one is a hiku
It is called clean world
Rivers dirty black,
O-zone layer has a crack,
Pollution please stop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Good messages! Very much needed in today's world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was nice a little of rhyme, but not too much, just like in the story of Goldilocks and the 3 Bears--just the right amount!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very beautiful, very beautiful, I like much, you have much imagination!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very good you should try to write a book of poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com