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Question: A poem for an old friend!. Is it a good gift!.!?
"autumn"
Running through the woods at night,
the time for fear is fresh and ripe!.
Shadow's playing with my mind,
vampires, demons of all kind!.
Every sound is amplified,
crickets, loons, terrified!.
Whistling past the graveyard now,
trying hard to get home, how!?
Gravestones far as you can see,
what else hidden, what could it be!.
Imagination now takes hold,
goosebumped neck, you're running cold!.
Thinking that that your time has come,
never knew you'd miss the sun!.
Almost there, the final gate,
creaking loud, your date with fate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very nice!.
Your imagination has grown and it's obvious!.
For some reason my favorite part of your poems are the last line!.
"Creaking loud, your date with fate!."
Very beautiful, Steve!. Painted a picture in my head!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Steve, I think it is a fun poem! Reminds me of a movie where young boys were trapped in a fresh dug grave for the night!. Would make a good gift for a friend!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Seems like everyone loves this one, Steve, including me!.
Though, I was hoping you'd do something more personal!.
But thank you =) I appreciate it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I visualize the scenery recreated on this piece, is a marvelous writing there!. Very nice! I'm sure your friend will like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
kudoos!.!.your like the best peomest of this age and time!.!.
i have read some of yours that are to wacked out but i think you honestly new that but like this this is a great peom of yoursWww@QuestionHome@Com
WOW!. Just WOW!. You're amazing! I mean that sincerely and honestly! LOVE the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
this one is fun and imagination comes to life for the reader!. It may be strange but to me this is a very happy poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's great, sounds like the old Steve!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Its a nice poem and all but it's to death strickenWww@QuestionHome@Com
what kind of friend is this that this poem would appeal to them!?Www@QuestionHome@Com