Is this actually a good poem?

Question: Is this actually a good poem!?

this girl asked a question, i answered!.
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but i wrote a poem (that was the answer)
and i was wondering if it was good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Honestly, I don't think it's a good poem!. As you say, it rambles, and it's often unclear what you mean!. For instance, "the obsession, the irony of how it all started", "my obligation, meaningful", "symmetrical my vision": I don't understand what any of those mean!. I'm not sure whether you did, or whether it sounded vaguely as though it might make sense somehow, and sounded poetic, so you put it down!.

One other thing: don't look to Yahoo Answers if you really want a meaningful answer to a question like "Is this good!?" The answers you get will almost always be "great", "I liked it", etc!. People are willing to give positive responses, but most people won't bother to give a negative response: what's the point!?--it won't make anyone happy!. I rarely do myself!. Only once in a long while, if the asker seems like he wants an honest answer (which most people don't)!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it might have been a guy!.!.!. but whatever!.
Nice poem I love the rhythm!. It takes talent to write a good free verse!.

Comments on my poem please!?!!?
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It's fairly good, as poems go!. It's hard to simply critique a poem as "good" or "bad"!. There are different styles for poetry!. I, for one, like freestyle, and line placement!.

Pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think with a few more descriptive words here and there for clarity, it could be made into a very good poem!. With the words you were given to work with you did an amazing job! Be proud!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its pretty good!. i see some talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it okWww@QuestionHome@Com