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Question: Any comments on my latest poem!?
A Perfect Ending
Sweet ritual,
no matter
the day
and what it brought!.
Lights out!. !. !. !.
a little talk
then a hug and a kiss,
“sweet dreams my love
see you in the morning!.”
Tender moments,
before slumber,
endearingly close
and ‘tuck-in’ the night;
a little love,
the perfect ending
to any day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Tuck-in the night!.!.!.great line and image!. A nice, sweet, reflective poem about love!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
If only my days didn't end with me stumbling through the door, climbing up the pitch black stairs, and falling face first onto my bed with the sheets still made!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I long for the tenderness that you have expressed here!.!.!. if only we were all that lucky!.
'tis the perfect ending to any day!!
Much love always,
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com
The sweetness of cozy togetherness, well done KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com
That was so SWEET!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
it's sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com
Love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it
it was a sweet poem:]Www@QuestionHome@Com