Comments poem ?

Question: Comments poem !?

I have a lead foot
I always get in trouble
From the blues in blue !?
As I dart pass
Faster than Ali
butterfly punches
On my rocket powered skate board
And parrot too!
Meet at your party
And we could share
In some boogaloo
We can hop madly around
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uhh!. this is a free verse right!? well!. there's a lot of room for improvement!. I know that free verse appear to be the new style of present poetry writing but try making words rhyme first for starters!. like a good ol' poem!. then once you've developed your style, move to free verse writing!. Now in free verse, try using deep words that sound good together!. Not just putting everything in your mind on paper!. good job on exposing yourself to the public! good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Link your poem better!.Some ideas can't be followed easily!. Whilst good poems are abstract, people should still be able to get the general idea!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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try to work in stanzas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com