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Question: What do you guys thinkk of!.!.!.!?
i wrote this poem like 4 years ago that i found in an old diary of mine!.!.!.
and i was wondering what you thought of it!.!.!.

although i know i'm not worth it
please just know i try
its really not that easy
not changing to that guy

right now i can't be who i am
as for i don't know who that is
probably because the only thing that matters
is the opinion that is his

although it may require
waking up at every sunrise
it really doesnt matter because
he can't see through my lies

its not as simple as changing over night
not that easy deciding who you'll be
its really hard to discover
your truest inner identity!.

so i guess i'll keep on waking up
as early as i can
at least until the day i've found
who i truly am!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I thought it was very good and if you'd like to put it in public you should try this link!.

www!.poems-and-quotes!.com

I've been a member there for about a year and it's a really great community!. Once again great job on the poem = )Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was really good you should find someone to put that poem in public!.It is really good!!I hope that made your day!.Does this answer seem like the best!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

BEAUTIFUL!.!.!.!.!.!.i think u got some serious talent!.!.!.!.i love the way it all goes together!.!.!.!.!.two thumbs up =-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, it's interesting!. And it's also interesting that you claim to be 13 years old!. So, you wrote this when you were 9 years old!? I see!.!.!.I don't know why so many people make up stories about themselves!. Maybe it's because the internet allows for such a thing!? Persoanlly, I think you're an older guy who is confused about his sexuality and/or gender!. It's clearly written in the 'poem!.' It's clear as day to me that you are not a female of any age, but rather a male!. But, to each their own!. Hey, if you want to be a 13 year old girl, go for it!.But yeah, that 'poem' was interesting!.!.!.
Have a nice day, 'sophie!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com