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Question: Poetry: LAST QUESTION!!! How do you reword these last lines!?
In the Smoking Car

The eyelids meet!. He'll catch a little nap!.
The grizzled, crew-cut head drops to his chest!.
It shakes above the briefcase on his lap!.
Close voices breathe, "Poor sweet, he did his best!."

"Poor sweet, poor sweet," the bird-hushed glades repeat,
Through which in quiet pomp his litter goes,
Carried by native girls with naked feet!.
A sighing stream concurs in his repose!.

Could he but think, he might recall to mind
The righteous mutiny or sudden gale
That beached him here; the dear ones left behind !.!.!.
So near the ending, he forgets the tale!.

Were he to lift his eyelids now, he might
Behold his maiden porters, brown and bare!.
But even here he has no appetite!.
It is enough to know that they are there!.

Enough that now a honeyed music swells,
The gentle, mossed declivities begin,
And the whole air is full of flower-smells!.
Failure, the longed-for valley, takes him in!.
-Richard Wilbur

Enough that now a honeyed music swells,
The gentle, mossed declivities begin, >HELPWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's enough that now a sweet and pleasant music is growing louder!. The terrain is no longer going uphill, but follows a gentle, mossy downslope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com