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Question: What do u think of my **Twilight** poem!?
its called eternity and its from edwards point of view
ETERNITY:
you will always be my only one
i will love you unconditionally
for always and eternity
you smell so lovely
as are lips draw near, you see
the secret ive been hiding
i want you to choose me
not him
sometimes i dont think you can see
how dangerouse i really can be
so i ask you
why not choose the other man!?
your answer is sweet
like the lullaby i sing
i cant wait for eternity with you
every day and every night
your face will be my gleaming light
i do not need heaven
if i have forever with you
our love is differant
human and vampire
but to me
your and angel god sent
you saved me
from my dark and lonely life
but now i have you
thats all i need
to be happy for eternity
so sleep my bella
dream happy dreams
in the morning youll see me
do not worry i wont leave
you are my everything
for always and eternityWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That!.!.!.was!.!.!.!.!.AWESOME! I loved it! That is just what Bella mean to Edward, you captured his feelings perfectly ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is beautiful!
I can't wait until breaking dawn comes out!.!.!.
you should send this to stephenie meyer's website
Heres a star!Www@QuestionHome@Com
long but excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com
very pretty!.Did you make it up!?Its beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow! thats really really good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its Great =DWww@QuestionHome@Com
That is sooo good! I love itWww@QuestionHome@Com
omg, im a rly big twilight fan!.!.
i must say your poem is vry good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is scary!.!.!.Are you planning to kill her!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Put it on poetry!.com!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
brilliant
fabulousWww@QuestionHome@Com
thats an awsome poem!. i wish i could write poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I LOVE IT!!!! it totally reminds me of edward!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
it's too mushy ickWww@QuestionHome@Com