A short poem =)?

Question: A short poem =)!?

You're so sweet,
You're so fine!.
But I think you're wonderful,
For a poems worth of lines!.

the end!.!.!.!. =) please rateWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

ummm!.!.!.!. I hate to say it but it sounds like a greeting card!. If that's what you were going for, great, but it's not my style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the last 2 lines don't make sense, especially the last one!. and i agree, it sounds like a greetong cardWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds a little cheesy to meWww@QuestionHome@Com