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I speak, but no one hears me!. I shout out load, but I might as well whisper!. I am drowned out by other voices!. I have many opinions, but I might as well have none!. I am often ignored by all!. I am unimportant unless called upon!. I am undetected when around!. No one would even know if I were gone!. I wrote this about 5 years ago!. Thanks to all who answer! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i kinda feel what u went through i felt invisible even around my close friends!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A little repetitive but I like the meaning and I like the poem!. It gives me a visual image of a person standing still and being ignored in the middle of a huge crowd of moving people walking by!. I like the second line the best!. Very good, *applause*Www@QuestionHome@Com It's seems a bit dark to me, and I would've used slightly different phrases each time, as well as putting in something sarcastic that makes the readers flinch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com its cool but also kind of sad!. i love it!. it is a unique styleWww@QuestionHome@Com |