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Question: An inspirational poem by me!!?
Could a night if moonless be so lost!?
Should a night’s sky be so full!?
If a star should shoot away out of our years
Would future sights be merely dull!?
As if we would notice them gone!.
A place for a full moons presence to be a treasure
wish such a place was not light-years away,
For a night sky's magic to be mystery and pleasure
the whole world over!.
Could a world if moonless be so lost!?
Tall tales if spoke with much inspiration
Is born creative thoughts, stars so bright
A moon lit sky sprinkles imagination
Hopes of a shooting star wished upon one night!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The title is incredible, i think it is that which makes the whole poem so good, great job! I just tried to add you (about the co-write) but i'm not sure it worked so you can find my IM on my page :o) again, great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hm, from everything else I've read in this section, this is a very well written poem!. Good punctuation, and a decent idea!.
Well done!. If you would like to know what to work on, then just try experimenting with different meters and flow!.
Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats good, keep writing, keep searching the stars,〝 ☆ ?
!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com