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Question: What do you all think of this!?!?!? I had never written poetry before and this came to me on Jan!.24, 08!.!?
YOU MISSED ONE

When you cleaned my room lookin for drugs,Mom,you missed one
When you searched my room lookin for razor blades, Mom,you missed one
When you questioned me about all the guys I had f****d, Mom,
you missed one
When I grew up,married and fell in love,well, God, you missed one!.
And,when You counted all your angels,in your roll call,On January twenty-one, You realized,
that you had missed one!.


In case you are wondering, my mood was very dark when I wrote this, and yes, it is about my life & missing the late Heath Ledger!. The marriage part when god missed one man, pertains to a guy I was deeply in love with 15 years ago!. he reportedly committed suicide a couple of years ago!. after his dad died!. I dont know for sure if he did die, but if he did, then the " god missed one," certainly fits!.Let me know what you think!. Good, bad, indifferent!?!?!? Like I said, I dontr write poetry!. I am not good at it!.!.this just came to me and I had written it as it came!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
sounds good!. i write all the time!. that was on point , keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very indifferentWww@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT YOUR A GOOD WRITER KEEP WRITEING YOUR RELLY GOOD!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com