How short was I supposed to go?

Question: How short was I supposed to go!?

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I was born when the sun
touched the pond, I swam
as not to become breakfast…

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Swim Forest, Swim!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In order to receive helpful answers, you should specify the question further!. When you say, "how short was I supposed to go," are you asking if your poem is too short!? What is your opinion of short and what purpose is this poem meant to serve!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You might want to make it a liiiittle bigger, but it's definitely okay to keep it like it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Homo Sapiens is to the Universe as the Mayfly is to the pond!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Long song!?
Wrong!.
Terse verse!?
Worse!Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOL - LOVED IT - brought a smile to my lips!. Could just see ya - in the dawn of time - swimming like h-ll - just to keep the human race alive!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well Shorty, that be short enough!. We get the fishy thing just right!. Your book should prove to be a fast read with these shorts page after page!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is short enough!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Can you be any more direct!?!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.PerfectWww@QuestionHome@Com