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Question: My poem!.!.!.!.hope you like it!.!.!.!.feedback will be appreciated!?
this is my second poem, hope you like it!. im only 13 if that makes a difference


The Skies


gosh im sad
and dont know why
i guess i just need
to dry my eye

i like to write about this
and dont know why
i jsut cant bring myself
to say good bye

i still love you
and theres no doubt
that i wont forget
what your about

your beautiful hair
and dark brown eyes
full of mystery
and surprise

your so strong
and nice and wise
you remind me
of the deep blue skies

i want to tell so so much
but i will say only this
i love you alot
and will long for your kissWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I really enjoyed your poem!. It's deep and meaningful!.
A heart-felt poem that really made me think!.!.!. thanks for sharing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its pretty interesting, i did not see anything that particularly caught my eyeWww@QuestionHome@Com